Sweet drawing of Natsu x Elle.
Pendant que haru et lucy ne sont pas là XD
great picture but your dialogue needs work
It's too on the nose and/or not natural speech.
Hang out in a coffee shop or mall and listen to how people talk
Moldrad, the dialog is provided by the customer
Wow, Ellie looks hot here. Great doujin and good idea.
Great comic ChrisF. Nice idea FireFairySlayer.
The comic is very good, and the scenes are very hot
Do Fairy Tail and Rave Master take place in the same universe?